Re: Committee Specification Approval Ballot Request for Telecom SOA Requirements Version 1.0

[Kim Goolsby <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>]

Enrico,

I've made the changes to the spec.

Thank you,

Kim

On Thu, Jun 10, 2010 at 2:46 AM, Ronco Enrico <enrico.ronco@telecomitalia.it> wrote:

Kim

Thank you very much for spotting the changes below

 

Yes, if you could make appropriate modifications I’d really appreciate.

 

Kind regards

 

Enrico

 

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From: Kim Goolsby [mailto:kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org]
Sent: mercoledì 9 giugno 2010 20.55
To: Ronco Enrico; soa-tel@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: Mary McRae
Subject: Fwd: Committee Specification Approval Ballot Request for Telecom SOA Requirements Version 1.0

 

Hi Enrico,

 

I've listed below required changes to this document:

1. Previous Version should be http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-tel/t-soa-req1.0/cd01/t-soa-req-01-cd-01.doc (.html & .pdf), rather than N/A.
2. In the Status section, please activate the link in the next-to-last paragraph (http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/soa-tel/ipr.php).
3. In the Normative References section, [SOAP 1.2], the underlying hyperlink does not match the link. The underlying hyperlink, seen when the cursor hovers over the link is this: mhtml:file://C:\Documents%20and%20Settings\00917426\Local%20Settings\Temporary%20Internet%20Files\OLK233\SOAP%20Version%201_2%20Part%201%20Messaging%20Framework%20(Second%20Edition).mht!http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/
   
   It should be the same as the link shown: http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part1/
4. In the Normative References section, [WS-S 1.1], the link does not go directly to the spec.
   The document is here: http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-SOAPMessageSecurity.pdf
5. In the Normative References section, [SCA Assembly 1.1], the reference date (March 2009) does not match that of the linked document (January 2010).
6. In the Normative References section, [SAML 2.0], the link does not go directly to the spec.
   The document is here:http://docs.oasis-open.org/security/saml/v2.0/saml-profiles-2.0-os.pdf
7. There is no Non Normative References section. Should have entries or N/A.
8. Suggest removing blank page 40.

I'd be happy to make these changes for you if you'd prefer to not have to make them yourself.

 

Thanks,

Kim

 

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