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Subject: NEW ISSUES - WORKING DRAFT 01


Peter

 

Here are my comments on draft 01:

 

Abstract after 1st para  -   Move lines 7-9 to this point as it’s imperative to state right up front that the Primer is a transient document, ie work in progress, from which future Standards and Committee Notes will be derived.

 

Line 140 – expand in full the 2 acronyms for those who do not know them

 

Line 317 – does the TC agree with the change from “will” to “preference”?

 

Lines 389-391 - need to add a few words of explanation at this point to each of these entries

 

General - line 413 – this whole section needs a thorough review and endorsement by the TC as it is new.

 

Lines 460-462 - need to add a few words of explanation at this point to each of these entries

 

General - line 476 - should this sub-section be in Part 3 as it's Explanatory rather than Standards material?

 

Line 1201 – there is no Appendix D, needs new cross-reference.

 

 

John

 



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