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Subject: New Issue - Conceptual - Policy Products
Line 380 Policy products are rather abruptly introduced here (and mentioned again in the context of a map) in the conformance table at line 384.
I think the new reader could be confused by this and the description in line 380 is aligned to an agency (albeit a conformant one).
I suggest something like:-
“The development and management of Policy Products that formally define government-wide approaches designed to achieve the goals of citizen service transformation”
(This is based on the definition at line 533 and I think is clearer than the present text).
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Nig
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