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Subject: New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description


Title: New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description

Line 754  I believe the brackets around “and beyond” should be removed. The external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance.

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Nig

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