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Subject: RE: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description
Nig Sincere thanks for your thorough sanity check. I’m sure Peter will respond in due course to all of them. John From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] Line 754 I believe the brackets around “and beyond” should be removed. The external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance. Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Fujitsu Services Limited, Registered in England no 96056, Registered Office 22 Baker Street, London, W1U 3BW This e-mail is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu Services does not guarantee that this e-mail has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. |
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