RE: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description

[Peter F Brown <peter@peterfbrown.com>]

I'm on the case! :-)

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From: John Borras
Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 6:21
To: 'Greenaway Nigel'
Cc: 'TGF TC List '
Subject: RE: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description



> Nig
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> Sincere thanks for your thorough sanity check.  I'm sure Peter will respond
> in due course to all of them.
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> John
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> From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] 
> Sent: 28 February 2011 12:25
> To: TGF TC List 
> Subject: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description
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> Line 754  I believe the brackets around "and beyond" should be removed. The
> external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line
> 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance.
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> Regards
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> Nig
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> Nig Greenaway
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