Issue 11 - General Editorial

Nig:

Noted and I agree. I’ll keep the general issue open although I don’t think it requires further comment, only monitoring for implementation as we proceed.

Peter

From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com]
Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 04:20
To: TGF TC List
Subject: [tgf] New Issue -General Editorial

We should define what person the document is written in and be consistent about it.

E.g. in Component 1 of the framework description (line224 onwards). The 2^nd person is used and in Component 2 (line 255 onwards), the first person is used.

Regards

Nig

Nig Greenaway

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