RE: Issue - Typographical - Franchise Model description

Agreed - Thanks

Regards

Nig

Nig Greenaway

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From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com]
Sent: 28 February 2011 16:43
To: Greenaway Nigel
Cc: 'TGF TC List '
Subject: Issue - Typographical - Franchise Model description - closed

Nig:

Taken on board. I propose re-wording the phrase as:

"Working across and beyond government to manage…"

No further action proposed

Peter

From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com]
Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 04:25
To: TGF TC List
Subject: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description

Line 754 I believe the brackets around “and beyond” should be removed. The external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance.