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Subject: Issue 9 - Content - Technology Management Framework, more substance to guidance sction? - open
Nig: I was unclear here – I had marked the text in red to highlight precisely that this is an error that needs fixing. There is a comment at the beginning of the section that this needs to be completed. I’ve made this clear now as a comment outside the actual text. If this is to be the fourth of four guidance sections, it needs to be fully elaborated as such – or dropped to a shorter reference and the further work spun out as a separate note as you suggest. My own view: I’d prefer to have more detail here, consistent with the previous guidance sections but time may not be on our side for a first draft. Other thoughts? Peter From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] Line 1200 There is no ‘Appendix D’ to the document. This statement should be deleted or refrence made to a forthcoming Committee Note Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com Fujitsu Services Limited, Registered in England no 96056, Registered Office 22 Baker Street, London, W1U 3BW This e-mail is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu Services does not guarantee that this e-mail has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free. |
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