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Subject: RE: [tgf] Request for comments on UK Information Infrastructurepaper.
<< So my overall comment is, which you may not wish to pass on,
there’s a lot more work required before meaningful comments can be
made.>> In the same vein, Nig, you may want to/please feel free to tone down,
or otherwise modify my somewhat blunt comments... But
thanks for the opportunity to review, and comments aside, it is a great
initiative, and Paul and co should be congratulated for making a start, under
such trying circumstances. I foresee other nations wanting to plagiarise
it in the fullness of time - always the litmus test for a good idea! Cheers Colin From: John Borras
[mailto:johnaborras@yahoo.co.uk] Nig Sorry for the late response. I find it very
difficult to provide constructive comments on this document for two
reasons. First it is very thin on content and appears to be nothing more
than a few “bullet” points. It needs a lot more flesh and
clarity about how it fits with the other components of the overall ICT
Strategy. And this leads to my second point, it says up front that it
supports the overall Information Architecture set out in the ICT
Strategy. Well there’s virtually nothing in the new Strategy about
IA so again it’s difficult to see the whole picture and understand what
this document is trying to cover and how it supports the overall IA. Seems
like a bit of uncoordinated document production going on. Having authored these sort of documents before it is very
important to show how each component fits into the whole picture so people can
understand the context and relationships of any individual piece. So my
overall comment is, which you may not wish to pass on, there’s a lot more
work required before meaningful comments can be made. BTW having said the above, I endorse all that Peter and Colin
have said. John From: Greenaway Nigel
[mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] Thank you both for your comments – I will pass these on. The document is one of a series being developed in parallel by
the Information domain that supports the UK Cross-Government Architecture. The
slow progress of the set is due to the work being done on a voluntary basis
during a time of cost constraints and the issues around finalising and
publishing documents whilst we wait for the new Government to emerge fully from
its project moratorium review pahse and start setting policies. The new ICT
strategy should be released soon and that should spark a number of
consultations and pulications. Regards Nig Nig
Greenaway Government
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(0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: nig.greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com From: Colin Wallis
[mailto:Colin.Wallis@dia.govt.nz] ..and
mine on Peter's …not
quite so 'PC' I'm afraid..:-) From: Peter F Brown
[mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com] Nig: Some comments attached using Tracked changes in the doc file. What is the timeline for this document? I notice the draft is
from June last year and there is no indication of a deadline for comments, etc.
This would be useful to know whether further details are possible/desired in
the timeframe imparted. Cheers, Peter From:
Greenaway Nigel [mailto:Nig.Greenaway@uk.fujitsu.com] Hi All,
Some time back I circulated the attached paper for
UK Government as part of one of our debates on the primer:-
<<20101117 - Infrastructure Requirements for UK Public Sector Information
Architecture.doc>> The
authors were happy for it to be shared with you and are now asking for comments
on the paper, so I would appreciate it if you could let me know what you think
of it and any suggestions for its improvement TIA Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU Lovelace Road, Bracknell,
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