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Subject: RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft
thanks for eagle-eyed error spotting, I'll do a small errata note for the TC meeting. Any more for any more...?
Cheers, Peter Peter F Brown Independent Consultant www.peterfbrown.com Twitter @PensivePeter Sent from my phone - Apologies for brevity and typos: it's hard writing on a moving planet From: Chris Parker Sent: 15-Nov-11 12:57 To: Peter F Brown; John Borras Cc: 'TGF TC List' Subject: RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft Peter
I’ve spotted two minor issues of a similar sort to the one John picked up, where changes made in the patterns haven’t yet flowed through to the primer. They are:
· Line 694: Transformation Business Model needs updating to Transformational Business Model (issue 54, which I think you’ve picked up at every other place in the primer, but it might be worth running a search) · Line 699: should read “Roadmap for Transformation” (issue 56, which again seems to have been fixed everywhere but here).
Thanks for such a great job.
Chris Parker Managing Partner, CS Transform Ltd, +44 7951 754 060 From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org]
On Behalf Of Peter F Brown
John, From:
John Borras Peter
One slight mis-alignment I’ve spotted. In the PL at line 909 we say MUST use the Policy Product Matrix etc but the Primer says SHOULD at line 337. We changed the PL at the last minute so perhaps you didn’t follow that through into the Primer?
Otherwise looks good to me.
John
From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org]
On Behalf Of Peter F Brown
Hi, As promised in my mail of last Thursday (10 November), I am pleased to announce finalisation of a new draft of the TGF Primer.
Please refer back to that e-mail for details about the process so far and the next steps.
Fewer comments were made against the Primer document. However, a number of further changes have been made in order to align the text with the changes proposed to the Core Patterns document (terminology, update of figures, structure and ordering of sections etc).
Attached is a .pdf version of the document showing all changes made and comments cross-referencing issues raised or alignment with the Core Patterns document. A .docx version will also be loaded to the OASIS work area, for those of you who need access to an editable version.
Best regards, Peter
Peter F Brown Independent Consultant
Using Information Technologies to Empower and Transform P.O. Box 49719, Los Angeles, CA 90049, USA Tel: +1.310.694.2278
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