RE: [tgf] Fw: OASIS TGF TC - 16th OCTOBER MEETING PAPERS

I attach a version of Nig’s paper with some suggested changes marked up in revisions mode.

Basically, I have done two things:

· Topped and tailed Nig’s text, with a short intro section (to explain why you might want to read the document and how it is structured) and a conclusion (prompted by Colin’s suggestions).

· Expanded the cross-references in the tables so they give the whole pattern name, not just its number (so that the reader does not need to keep referring back to the diagram to see what we’re talking about).

I had also planned to draft a sentence or so on each pattern to go in the ‘notes’ section of the table, explaining briefly why it was relevant to the IoT characteristic being discussed. But in the end I have abandoned the attempt – because my explanations were either so short that they added little to that which is implicit in the pattern title, or were starting to get so long that the combined effect was excessive. Maybe others could come up with pithier one-liners for each pattern than I’ve managed to. If not, my thinking is that we should simply delete the ‘notes’ columns from the tables. I think that Nig’s intro text above each table, coupled with the expanded cross-references to named patterns, is enough to show why the TGF is relevant without duplicating the TGF.

Looking forward to the call on Thursday.

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Chris Parker

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From: tgf@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tgf@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of John Borras
Sent: 13 October 2014 09:13
To: TGF TC List
Subject: [tgf] Fw: OASIS TGF TC - 16th OCTOBER MEETING PAPERS

Attached are the papers and call details for our TC call on Thursday.

Any further thoughts on Nig's latest paper would be appreciated before the meeting. Peter is hoping to have a draft paper for consideration under Item 4.

A note of any absences would be welcomed in advance.

Finally just a reminder that this call is at 07.30 UK / 08.30 CEST / 02.30 EST / 23.30 PST (15^th) / 19.30 NZ / 16.30 AUS.

John

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