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Subject: Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau
Bernard, At 14:48 18.11.2002 +0100, Bernard Vatant wrote: >I'm very pleased myself with Patrick's review, but it brings substantive >editorial changes >that go further than simple rewording, e.g. getting rid of a certain >number of superfluous >prose. So, before changing the draft, I've posted Patrick's review for >comments at: >http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/pld/d1review.txt > >It's a plain text version, tagged by Patrick in original text and proposed >corrections. > >I will send my own comments separately. I've tried to look at this, but it's difficult in its current form. Could I suggest that you prepare a new draft, in HTML, in which you include all the changes that you agree with and leave alternative formulations in just those places where you disagree? I think that would make it much easier for us to have a focused discussion both before and during the Baltimore meeting. Steve -- Steve Pepper, Chief Executive Officer <pepper@ontopia.net> Convenor, ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34/WG3 Editor, XTM (XML Topic Maps) Ontopia AS, Waldemar Thranes gt. 98, N-0175 Oslo, Norway. http://www.ontopia.net/ phone: +47-23233080 GSM: +47-90827246
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