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Subject: Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau
Steve I had in fact prepared Patrick's version, so I have it published now at: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/recommendations/general_pld.htm I did not want to change the current draft, since I had not enough feedback on it. As said before, I basically agree with Patrick's rewording, except that I have kept a section that he would have cut altogether (about Publishers). Hope that fits better your parser :) Bernard ----- Message d'origine ----- De : "Steve Pepper" <pepper@ontopia.net> À : "tm-pubsubj-comment" <tm-pubsubj-comment@lists.oasis-open.org> Cc : "Patrick Durusau" <pdurusau@emory.edu> Envoyé : jeudi 28 novembre 2002 12:20 Objet : Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau > Bernard, > > At 14:48 18.11.2002 +0100, Bernard Vatant wrote: > >I'm very pleased myself with Patrick's review, but it brings substantive > >editorial changes > >that go further than simple rewording, e.g. getting rid of a certain > >number of superfluous > >prose. So, before changing the draft, I've posted Patrick's review for > >comments at: > >http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/pld/d1review.txt > > > >It's a plain text version, tagged by Patrick in original text and proposed > >corrections. > > > >I will send my own comments separately. > > I've tried to look at this, but it's difficult in its current form. > Could I suggest that you prepare a new draft, in HTML, in which you > include all the changes that you agree with and leave alternative > formulations in just those places where you disagree? I think that > would make it much easier for us to have a focused discussion both > before and during the Baltimore meeting. > > Steve > > -- > Steve Pepper, Chief Executive Officer <pepper@ontopia.net> > Convenor, ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34/WG3 Editor, XTM (XML Topic Maps) > Ontopia AS, Waldemar Thranes gt. 98, N-0175 Oslo, Norway. > http://www.ontopia.net/ phone: +47-23233080 GSM: +47-90827246 > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > To subscribe or unsubscribe from this elist use the subscription > manager: <http://lists.oasis-open.org/ob/adm.pl> >
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