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Subject: Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Comments required


Mary Nishikawa scripsit:

> Thanks Steve for all your work.  Some comments below:

What I noticed was the systematic overuse of quotation marks.  In the
first paragraph of 2.1, e.g., we have "Isaac Newton" as a subject.
In fact, "Isaac Newton" is a string (possibly a basename); the subject
is Isaac Newton.  Similarly with "this document" and most of the others.

Likewise "apple" in 2.4.3.

-- 
John Cowan           http://www.ccil.org/~cowan              cowan@ccil.org
To say that Bilbo's breath was taken away is no description at all.  There
are no words left to express his staggerment, since Men changed the language
that they learned of elves in the days when all the world was wonderful.
        --_The Hobbit_

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