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Subject: Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Comments required
Mary Nishikawa scripsit: > Thanks Steve for all your work. Some comments below: What I noticed was the systematic overuse of quotation marks. In the first paragraph of 2.1, e.g., we have "Isaac Newton" as a subject. In fact, "Isaac Newton" is a string (possibly a basename); the subject is Isaac Newton. Similarly with "this document" and most of the others. Likewise "apple" in 2.4.3. -- John Cowan http://www.ccil.org/~cowan cowan@ccil.org To say that Bilbo's breath was taken away is no description at all. There are no words left to express his staggerment, since Men changed the language that they learned of elves in the days when all the world was wonderful. --_The Hobbit_ ---------------------------------------------------------------- To subscribe or unsubscribe from this elist use the subscription manager: <http://lists.oasis-open.org/ob/adm.pl>
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