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Comment from: g.hopmans@mssm.nl

Hello All,

A few weeks ago I started to translate the recommendation "Published Subjects Introduction and Basic Requirements.htm" to Dutch to explain PSI in a kind of contest.

It is available at 
http://www.mssm.nl/en/Published%20Subjects%20Introductie%20en%20Basis%20Benodigheden.htm
Hopefully it is more useful for others as well. For the dutch-speaking: i am sure some things can be translated better thus if you find something please let me know.

One comment: I would put more emphasize on unambigous and stable in section 2.5.3 after the scenario and picture. Something as a sentence like: 'compared to the situation at section 2.4.3 we now have a definition that is unambiguous to humans and stable for machines'.

Gabriel Hopmans
Morpheus <URL: http://www.mssm.nl >



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