Properties, elements, attributes editorial

[Patrick Durusau <patrick@durusau.net>]

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Greetings!

Depending on the amount of revision that is acceptable at this point,
the TC may want to reconsider it use of short definitions for child
elements.

Under 4.2 Properties we find:

The Definitions element has the following properties:
.
.
.
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RelationshipType: This element specifies a type of Relationship that
can be referenced as a type for Relationship Templates of a Service
Template.
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Which is accurate as far as it goes but:

*****
RelationshipType: This element specifies a type of Relationship that
can be referenced as a type for Relationship Templates of a Service
Template. 8 Relationship Types [as a hyperlink, might be better]
*****

One of the promises of markup was the ability to quickly and easily
navigate to different parts of documents.

It doesn't speak well of markup if the people who write it don't take
advantage of it.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick


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Patrick Durusau
patrick@durusau.net
Technical Advisory Board, OASIS (TAB)
Former Chair, V1 - US TAG to JTC 1/SC 34
Convener, JTC 1/SC 34/WG 3 (Topic Maps)
Editor, OpenDocument Format TC (OASIS), Project Editor ISO/IEC 26300
Co-Editor, ISO/IEC 13250-1, 13250-5 (Topic Maps)

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