Thank you for the feedback.
Best,
Paul
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On Behalf Of Paul Knight
Sent: Monday, January 19, 2015 4:11 PM
To: tosca-comment@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [tosca-comment] In-publication comments on TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML Version 1.0 csd02
In publishing this, I noted the following issues for TC consideration:
- Appendix H.2 (Terminology) has replaced the usual simple reference to RFC 2119 with a list of the same references as in H.3 - something got messed up there.
- In Appendix E2, the anchoring of the image is not quite right, so in the HTML, the image appears above the statement "The following diagram [...]"
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"Pinger" shows a number of broken links in the text, most in section A4.14, which are rendered as something like:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/TOSCA-Simple-Profile-YAML-v1.0-wd04-Rev04.docx#DEFN_ELEMENT_CONSTRAINTS -
another broken link is in section A5.3.1.3, where the namespace is listed wrongly (without /ns token)
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another is in G.1.6.1, a broken link to github
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in Appendix I (Acknowledgments), four of the email addresses have broken links, which render similar to:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/IBM_ADMIN/Documents/IBM/SWG/Standards/SDOs/OASIS/TOSCA/Interop%20SC/YAML/Frank.Leymann@informatik.uni-stuttgart.de
these are for: Frank Leymann, Krishna Raman, Nikunj Nemani, and Richard Probst
Best regards,
Paul
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