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Subject: Editorial comments on TOSCA V2 draft
I attach a word document containing a number of comments on the TOSCA v2 draft. Some of these are pure editorial, e.g. spelling, wording and cut and paste error correction. Other comments fall into these themes:
Please feel free to create separate threads for any of these which you feel deserve greater attention.
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