Re: [tosca-interop-demo] Updated Press Release for TOSCA Interop

["Probst, Richard" <richard.probst@sap.com>]

Carol, there is an extra word in 1 sentence, perhaps the result of an incomplete edit. We need to remove the word "offered" before releasing this.

Change "between cloud orchestration tools and runtimes offered. Products from..." to "between cloud orchestration tools and runtimes. Products from..."

With that 1 change, everything looks good to go. 

Best,
--Richard

From: Carol Geyer [mailto:carol.geyer@oasis-open.org]
Sent: Wednesday, October 09, 2013 04:23 PM Eastern Standard Time
To: tosca-interop-demo@lists.oasis-open.org <tosca-interop-demo@lists.oasis-open.org>
Subject: [tosca-interop-demo] Updated Press Release for TOSCA Interop
 

Attached is the final version of the TOSCA Interop press release, which will be distributed on Tuesday, 15 Oct. Thanks to everyone who contributed.

Please review and let me know ASAP if any additional changes are needed.

Looking forward to seeing you all in Luxembourg,
Carol

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