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Subject: RE: [tosca-interop] Groups - OASIS TOSCA Interop Demo - Abstract - 2013-08-26 RP3.docx uploaded
Hi Paul, Yes, I edited your second upload. You will see the red-lines. I changed all instances of “This demo” to “The demo” because I believe it reads better, and the context is clear as soon as someone has read the first sentence.
But if you really insist, change it back. Since the SC approved the draft today and Matt immediately sent it to Jane to get it posted ASAP, I think changes should be copied to the SC, so I don’t want
to take this offline. We should be able to converge it quickly, before people get sick of the spam. Best, --Richard From: tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org]
On Behalf Of Lipton, Paul C Hi Richard, Thanks for the iteration. FYI, there were actually a number of minor and some medium level tweaks, as well, to sentences, e.g. for a minor one, don’t call the demo “the OASIS
demo,” but rather “This OASIS demo,” unless you never think we’ll have another OASIS demo. :-) More seriously, please bear with me, as I will have to take a look later today. Could you please confirm (offline if you want) that you based this on my second upload (revision
#2) at
https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/tosca-interop/download.php/50444/OASIS%20TOSCA%20Interop%20Demo%20-%20Abstract%20-%202013-08-26%20PL2.docx?
If anybody wants Richard and me to take this often line, just let us know, of course.
Thanks, Paul
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