RE: [tosca-interop] Groups - TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014

Hi Paul,

First of all, sorry for having missed your deadline on last Friday due to my holidays last week.

In your draft I think you have already mentioned most of the key aspects that we had identified while working on the CIO slide deck.

As expected for such a compact abstract, many sentences are very heavyweight and cause a need of multiple reading (at least for me). Just an observation, no need to change, I think.

There are two aspects that I’m still missing a bit:

- In paragraph #2 dependency descriptions are not only needed between application components but also regarding infrastructure hardware and software components. Depending on the role of a visitor infrastructure dependencies may be of high interest. You actually touch on that aspect vaguely in paragraph #3 , but it’s pretty hidden in my mind.

- TOSCA enables automated requirement-to-capability matching. This is a key TOSCA feature laying the foundation for the “truly competitive ecosystem” that you correctly highlight. Admitted that this is a somewhat more technical aspect, but technically focused people are part of our target audience on ODCA Forecast. I think so far you don’t mention this aspect at all, therefore I’d suggest to try adding it somewhere in paragraph #3.

Thanks, Karsten

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Dear (interop) TOSCA-teers,

As agreed in today’s SC meeting (June 16^th), please find the below document (track changes) for your comments and suggestions. Would you please provide your comments no later than Friday. As asked, I will provide merged version for discussion/revision/approval on our Interop SC meeting of June 23rd.

Thanks,

Paul

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Subject: [tosca-interop] Groups - TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx uploaded

Document Name: TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx

Description
Abstract for TOSCA presentation as part of ODCA Forecast 2014 Conference
panel.
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Submitter: Mr. Paul Lipton
Group: TOSCA Interoperability SC
Folder: Documents
Date submitted: 2014-06-16 14:26:07

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