Re: [tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05

[Thomas Spatzier <thomas.spatzier@de.ibm.com>]

Hi Chet,

thanks for your comments. I checked wd-14 and item #1 looks good for me in
the word document. Using the 'Alt+F9' shortcut, I get the a {HYPERLINK
"../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd"} field (see also attached screenshot). Also, if
you follow the "non-redlines" version we uploaded to Kavi, there should be
no comments and tracked changes. We started to upload a separate "redlines"
version with latest WDs. Maybe with the last upload, I just did a mistake.

Let me know if you still observe any issues with our latest WD.

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Regards,
Thomas
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From:	Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org>
To:	"tosca@lists.oasis-open.org" <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org>,
Date:	19.11.2012 21:10
Subject:	[tosca] Items we noted while working on TOSCA CSD05
Sent by:	<tosca@lists.oasis-open.org>



Members of the TOSCA TC,

Below are some items we noticed while preparing CSD05. We are bringing them
to your attention so that you can address them as you like.

1) In Appendix D, the first line "TOSCA-v1.0.xsd:" is hyperlinked to a
non-existent address. The relative link is:
../TOSCA-v1.0-csd05/schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd

but it should be:

../schemas/TOSCA-v1.0.xsd

An easier solution might just be to remove the hyperlink link and refer
readers to the "Additional artifacts" section for the link.

2) The document was delivered with change tracking on and comments embedded
in the draft. We accepted all changes, turned tracking off and deleted the
comments. However, I really want to avoid us touching the TC's authored
comment. Please, in future, prepare and approve a version without embedded
changes or comments.

 Thanks.

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/chet
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