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Subject: Feedback from OASIS for NFV Simple Profile Next Committee Spec (03)


Hi Shitao,

 

Congratulations again to you and the NFV Ad Hoc group participants on the TC acceptance of CSD02. OASIS Staff has provided feedback for CSD02 (see below). Kindly let me know if there is any reason that these changes cannot be made prior to your candidate for Committee Spec Draft 03 (your next Committee Spec candidate). We would have to provide some explanation, if that were the case.

 

- namespace - In Section 6.1 [1], the namespace is declared as:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/ns/simple/yaml/1.0/nfv/1.0/

There is nothing specifically wrong with this construction, but I want to bring it to your attention for careful consideration.. I had a couple of specific questions -  Is this intended as a sub-namespace of the "TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML v1.0" namespace ( http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/ns/simple/yaml/1.0)?  Is there a reason for the terminal "/"?

I would have anticipated a construction more parallel with the TOSCA-yaml namespace (above) or the base TOSCA namespace (http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/ns/2011/12), perhaps something like "http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/ns/simple/nfv/1.0"

However, namespace names are arbitrary, and the TC can choose any acceptable string structure after the base "http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/ns/"

 

- nit - also in 6.1, it appears that the references to "version 1.0.0" in the text was mistakenly left as-is, while others were changed from 1.0.0 to 1.0 (see Revision History[2] entry for 2015-7-2).

 

- Formatting of some list items, so they don't show up in the Table of Contents.

I noted two places where a total of five list items had a paragraph type which caused them to appear in the Table of Contents.

The items are:

- The three numbered paragraphs under Section 5.

- In the Acknowledgments section (Appendix A), the line "Participants" and the line for Chris Lauwers.

 

The fix required here for each case is to modify the paragraph style so that the "Outline level" is "Body Text" instead of "Level 1".

Specific gesture in MS-Word:

Place cursor in the line, right click, choose "Paragraph". Choose the "Indents and Spacing" tab. Make the change in "Outline level".

Now these items will not show up in the Table of Contents.

 

[1] Section 6.1: http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/tosca-nfv/v1.0/csd02/tosca-nfv-v1.0-csd02.html#_Toc433298708

[2] Revision History: http://docs.oasis-open.org/tosca/tosca-nfv/v1.0/csd02/tosca-nfv-v1.0-csd02.html#_Toc433298764

 

 

Thanks,

Paul

 



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