Hi TOSCA-teers,
As you remember from our last TC meeting (March 31), Matt, our esteemed editor for the YAML Simple Profile, and I discussed some corrections requested by OASIS
Staff. As mentioned, the corrections are non-semantic, primarily involving editorial layout and uniformity issues. I have confirmed that OASIS Staff is comfortable with the TOSCA TC deferring these corrections until v1.1. Matt informed us that he has already
made these corrections to the v1.1 working draft of the YAML Simple Profile. Thus, I consider the matter closed pending any further comments from OASIS Staff or concerns from TC members.
That said; FYI and in the spirit of our continual commitment to transparency, the complete details are below. My apologies for the delay.
Thanks,
Paul
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To: Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org>
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Subject: [tosca-comment] Re: TC Admin comments on TOSCA Simple Profile in YAML, V1.0 CSPRD02 To: tc mailing list
Hi all,
Please note that some of the things listed in the original message as "fixed" were fixed in the first Public Review of TOSCA-YAML (Septermber, 2015), but NOT this time. You may want to compare. Please feel free to contact me if needed.
On Thu, Mar 10, 2016 at 6:27 PM, Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org> wrote:
- It appears that the document template was changed, beginning with the last page of the TOC. The margins are narrower (0.75 right and left). Margins should be 1" top, 1" right and left, 0.5" bottom. [this will center the "new" footer,
which is currently offset]. Afterward fixing this, re-check tables, particularly Section 3.6.2.1 table, for possible text wrapping issues.
- The footer uses different font size (Arial 10 instead of Arial 8) and wording ("Standards Track Draft" instead of "Standards Track Work Product"). We fixed this in publishing. Please fix these in your working draft as well.
- We noted that several blocks of text used the wrong font (Cambria 11). In publishing, we corrected this by setting the following three styles to use Arial 10:
Please make the same corrections to your working draft.
- Around section 2.10.1, we corrected some text in the wrong font by re-applying the "normal" style. (Carefully, to avoid disrupting the bold text). Please apply these style and font changes to your working draft.
- In Section 1.8 Glossary that "Node Template" definition starts off with "Relationship Template" Is that correct? Also, the paragraph formatting of the definitions seems to use weird indenting.
- In section 5.7.4.4, the diagram overlays the footer. We fixed this on our side by setting the preceding paragraph attribute to "keep with next".
- In section 2.10.2, second paragraph after Figure 1, there is a reference to "Section 0". The link jumps to 2.9.2. Is this correct?
- The table of examples is labelled Table of Figures. Also, the paragraph styles of these two titles should be changed from "Body text" to "Level 1", so they will show up in the TOC.
Please let us know if you have any questions on any of these.
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