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Subject: RE: [tosca] Groups - draft-tosca-nfv-v1.0-wd04-rev05-ChangeMark.doc uploaded
Hello Shitao, et al,
Happy New Year!
Thank you for updating the latest draft. There are editorial errors during your edits.
Editorial Errors: Multiple instance of
1) floarting => floating
2) l2_address_aData => l2_address_data
3) l3_address_aData => l3_address_data
4) pparent => parent
5) there are multiple instance of “side bar” comments from me, where these comments are no longer valid. Thus, its should be deleted now, such as “moved to section 3.1”, “moved from 6.11”
Finally, there are additional clean-up and tweaking of the Section 3 (NFV Architecture & Concept Overview). A separate contribution is needed for this task.
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