RE: Minor errors in latest draft

[Priya T G <priya.g@netcracker.com>]

Hi Chris,

 

Here are some comments on Section 7.3.8 Use a custom workflow language:

 

1.       The beginning of this section should capture our discussions on this topic, i.e. about the responsibilities of decomposition of tosca template, maintaining and exchanging instance model etc. so that the strategy and applicability of third party work flows is clear for the readers. Is it necessary to introduce and describe âexternal workflow enginesâ as it was done for artifact processors so that it is clear how TOSCA Orchestrators can interact with such engines? This would also align this section with clear statements already present in the specification about declarative and imperative workflows, state change, steps weaving etc.

2.       Section 3.8.7.1 talks about property definitions and attribute mappings. There should also be clear examples about interactions between TOSCA and external workflows , for e.g.

a.       How does an attribute from a node template/instance get assigned as input and passed to external workflow.

b.      Is it possible/not possible to invoke operations for a particular node template from external workflows? E.g. invoking interfaces->Standard->Configure , interfaces ->Standard -> Create etc.

c.       How are the outputs from external workflows returned and assigned to attributes in the node template?

 

3.       Section 11.1.19 - tosca.artifacts.nfv.SwImage to be changed to tosca.artifacts.Deployment.Image

 

 

Regards,

Priya

 

From: tosca@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tosca@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Chris Lauwers
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Subject: [tosca] RE: Minor errors in latest draft

 

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Hi Arturo,

 

These have been fixed in rev15 (to be published early next week).

 

Thanks again for pointing these out.

 

Chris

 

From: tosca@lists.oasis-open.org <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org> On Behalf Of Chris Lauwers
Sent: Tuesday, January 15, 2019 1:00 PM
To: Arturo Martin De Nicolas <arturo.martin-de-nicolas@ericsson.com>; claude.noshpitz@att.com; tosca@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [tosca] RE: Minor errors in latest draft

 

Thanks Arturo, Iâll try to correct those in the next revision.

 

Chris

 

From: tosca@lists.oasis-open.org <tosca@lists.oasis-open.org> On Behalf Of Arturo Martin De Nicolas
Sent: Tuesday, January 15, 2019 4:44 AM
To: claude.noshpitz@att.com; Chris Lauwers <lauwers@ubicity.com>; tosca@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [tosca] Minor errors in latest draft

 

Hi Claude and Chris,

 

I spotted 3 small errors in the latest draft  (wd0.1-rev14) that I think could be fixed directly  before we finalize 1.3:

 

 

1) 3.3.5.1.1 Single-line grammar

 

The second line and 3rd line should be removed

 

 

2) 3.8.3 Node Template

 

The node_filter entry in the table still talks about the 'selectable' directive. This directive is not defined and we had removed some other text referring to it, but seems this part was missed.

 

 

3) Clause after 3.10.3.9.3, artifact types

This clause has no numbering. It should be 3.10.3.10. Then âkeynameâ should become 3.10.3.10.1, Grammar should become 3.10.3.10.2 and Example 3.10.3.10.3. Afterwards the L4 index for succeeding clauses must be stepped.

 

Thanks.

 

BR,

Arturo

 

 

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