RE: [trans-ws] Whitepaper - draft 3

["Magnus Martikainen" <MMartikainen@sdl.com>]

Hi Peter,

 

Nice job on the life cycle!

I’ve made 2-3 minor corrections (typos or missing formatting) and I resized the Visio diagram to fit on the page. Updated document attached.

 

Cheers,
Magnus

 

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From: Reynolds, Peter [mailto:Peter.Reynolds@lionbridge.com]
Sent: Monday, April 10, 2006 4:52 AM
To: trans-ws@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: FW: [trans-ws] Whitepaper - draft 3

 

Hi all,

 

Kevin has updated this document.

 

See his comment below:

I have updated with the draft 3 document with some changes I made to the “implementation” section on the advice of our editor to differentiate it from the article I did in localisation focus last month. I have updated the figures and tables to caption text in case a table of figures is required and I will have the implementation up on the website by COB today. I hope this is ok. If you think it is too late for changes then that’s fine they are nothing major just a re-wording really. I have attached the draft 4 document. Let me know if it is ok?

 

Thanks,

 

Peter.

 

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From: Reynolds, Peter [mailto:Peter.Reynolds@lionbridge.com]
Sent: Monday, April 10, 2006 9:11 AM
To: trans-ws@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [trans-ws] Whitepaper - draft 3

 

Hi all,

 

Good morning.

 

I have attached the latest version of the Whitepaper. The main addition is the localisation life cycle diagram. We proabably need to decide on whether to use US or International English. The notes below show what I have done.

 

Thanks,

 

Peter.

 

RequestQuote – The spec assumes a prior relationship between customer and vendor. The whitepaper should be changed to reflect this. – Peter removed reference to this. Left in description of the methods.

SubmitJob – We will check the spec to ensure it has a PO value. - OK

There was a type with the use of evoking rather than invoking. OK

Services was also misspelt

 

Complete life cycle

Magnus suggested that it would be good to have a complete life cycle with the whitepaper. – Peter to draft. - done

 

Development life cycle – Peter to review. – Information on this is the Introduction

 

Ignite Uri will be available soon.

 

References to include:

• Trans WS TC
• XLIFF TC
• OASIS
• Ignite
• LRC
• OSCAR

 

We will remove the glossary as the definitions are already there. - done

 

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Peter Reynolds

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Lionbridge

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