Re: [ubl-security] Draft 11 of the UBL Digital Signature Profile for review

[Andrea Caccia <andrea.caccia@studiocaccia.com>]

Hi Jon, taking a quick look to the document I've seen some minor problem in referencing [ASiC] I've not noticed before, sorry for that.
Reference to the ASiC standard in clause 4 (it should be published in 1-2 days by ETSI, no URL is yet available) should be similar the reference to XAdES:

[ASiC] Associated Signature Containers (ASIC). ETSI TS 102 918 V1.1.1 [http://uri.etsi.org/...] 2011-04

Them near the end of clause 7 please change the text:
"The simple ASiC format (ASiC-S) can be created…"
to:
"The simple [ASiC] container (ASiC-S) can be created…" (with [ASiC] pointing to its reference in clause 4)

I noted also that I used "ASiC-S" without updating 2.1 terms and definitions. 
A new term should then be added as follows:

ASiC-S (Associated Signature Container - Simple form)
	A standard container that associates a single data object with one or more detached signature(s) that applies to it [ASiC]

This should help the reader to understand the text in clause 7.

Thanks a lot,
Andrea


Il giorno 20/apr/2011, alle ore 21.00, Jon Bosak ha scritto:

> Hello ubl-security,
> 
> Attached is a (preliminary) Draft 11 of the Digital Signature Profile,
> revised in light of Andrea's comments of 17 April (thank you, Andrea!).
> Please review and let me know if anything needs to be changed before
> I put this in UBL 2.1 PRD2.
> 
> Jon
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