Re: [ubl] Re: [ubl-clsc] Groups - wd-ublclsc-codelist-20040414.doc uploaded

[Tim McGrath <tmcgrath@portcomm.com.au>]

just a few last minute suggestions (if you still want them)...

1. consider incorporating the relevant [R*] rules with the NDR CDL rules 
- that is either show the connections or define them once here and have 
NDR refer to them.  otherwise we get overlap and duplication.

2. section 3.1 the table for data model definition. in the first column 
"CCT" the CCT for "Content" should be "Code. Content" and the CCT for 
CodeName should be "Code. Name. Text".

3. section 3.2 the table for supplementary components.  
- the property term for CodeListNamespacePrefixID is "Namespace Prefix" 
not "Identifier"
- neither CodeListDescription nor CodeListCredits have a CCT so they 
should be "N/A" in the CCT column

4. in section 4 the first diagram has been updated in the documentation 
(see http://ibiblio.org/bosak/ubl/UBL-1.0/art/UBL-1.0-SchemaDependency.jpg)

5. section 4.2 supplemntary components mapping.  the complex type 
attribute mapping  datatypes are not correct, as follows:
CodeListName should be xs:string not xs:normalizedString
CodeListAgencyName should be xs:string not xs:normalizedString
CodeListURI should be xs:anyURI not xs:normalizedString
CodeListSchemeURI should be xs:anyURI not xs:normalizedString
CodeListDescription should be xs:string not xs:normalizedString
CodeListCredits should be xs:string not xs:normalizedString

6. not sure it is important but in section 4.5.1 (Data model and example 
values), we should now use the CodeListName as "Currency" not "Currency 
and Funds"

7. in section 4.5.3 (Schema file name), we no longer have the word 
"-Use-" in the filename.  i suggest dropping the "draft" as well. so it 
may be better as:
UBL-CodeList-{CodeListName}-{CodeListVersionID}.xsd

8. throughout section 4.5.3.* it may be worthwhile to cut and paste 
actual UBL 1.0 schema fragments into the samples (some are inccorect 
becasue of earlier comments)...  the schema we want is at 
http://ibiblio.org/bosak/ubl/UBL-1.0/xsd/codelist/UBL-CodeList-CurrencyCode-1.0.xsd

9. contributors - my name is spelt McGrath not Mcgrath  (try stating 
that in camelcase).

G. Ken Holman wrote:

> I've posted the PDF rendition of this without changes as a revision of 
> this word document.  This document has general public read permissions:
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> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/6386/wd-ublclsc-codelist-20040414.pdf 
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> Access to the Word rendition with the reviewer markup is still 
> available through the original links copied below.
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> ....................... Ken
>
> At 2004-04-14 11:07 +0000, burnsmarty@aol.com wrote:
>
>> The document wd-ublclsc-codelist-20040414.doc has been submitted by 
>> Martin Burns (burnsmarty@aol.com) to the UBL Code List SC document 
>> repository.
>>
>> Document Description:
>> All,
>>
>> The attached version has incorporated suggested modifications and 
>> corrections since the previous version.
>>
>> Marty Burns
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