Dear Jon,
Tim and others,
I took the
chance to have a pre-public view on the sanity check version you posted
to the mailing list. There are some small issues I would like to raise
(there might be the small chance that you can integrate them if needed
to the public review version).
I refer here
to the index.html file.
1. In
section 5.2 there is a reference to Figure 2. ... I think it should
refer to Figure 1 instead.
2. (very
minor!!!) In table 1 the cell borders for Consignee are missing
for the two last cells inside the row.
Note: The
next two issues are probably no issues at all, since the UML diagrams
you provide are just examples how to use the UBL documents. However, I
included my comments ... they might be useful somehow.
3. I
personally would include in Figure 2 "Create Catalogue Process Model"
an additional starting point for the provider party to initiate the
sending of a catalogue.
4. In Figure
8 "Ordering Process Model": In case the Seller Party sends a rejection
"Order Response Simple" I would assume the Buyer Party to be able to
end the process without sending anything. However, the only way to
finish the process for the Buyer is to go thru the "Accept Order" case,
which is not true in case a rejection was received. This means to
finish the process the Buyer has to send the "Order Cancellation".
Other than
that I think the specification improved very well. Great job!-)
Greetings,
Karsten