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Subject: AW: [uddi-spec] FW: Posting "Understanding Key Partitions" Technical Note to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/


All,

I do have several comments to the introductory sections of the TN - please see attached document.

Regards,
 Claus

-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
Von: Luc Clement [mailto:lclement@mercury.com] 
Gesendet: Montag, 11. September 2006 23:57
An: Jason Garbis; uddi-spec@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: hately@us.ibm.com; colgrave@uk.ibm.com; Matthew J. Dovey; Rob Kochman; MACIAS, Paul; Oleg Mikulinsky; Rogers, Tony; Tony Rogers; von Riegen, Claus
Betreff: RE: [uddi-spec] FW: Posting "Understanding Key Partitions" Technical Note to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/

Thanks Jason for this. The changes (good catches) have been made and attached. 

For approval during tomorrow's call.

-- Luc

-----Original Message-----
From: Jason Garbis 
Sent: Monday, September 11, 2006 12:41
To: Luc Clement; uddi-spec@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: hately@us.ibm.com; colgrave@uk.ibm.com; Matthew J. Dovey; Rob Kochman; MACIAS, Paul; Oleg Mikulinsky; Rogers, Tony; Tony Rogers; von Riegen, Claus
Subject: RE: [uddi-spec] FW: Posting "Understanding Key Partitions" Technical Note to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/

(Resending and combining my previous two emails to be sent to the group individually....I believe that the Mercury mail server is not properly munging our outbound email addresses back to @systinet.com so the OASIS mailing list server will accept them....apologies if you receive this twice)


Hi folks,

 I will be unable to attend the TC call tomorrow, so I will submit my comments on this doc via email

Other than the few minor edits/typos I point out below, I approve the content of this document.

My comments:

1. On page 3, the text reads: " If the registry server generated its own keys for classification schemes, the key for the same EAN GLN classification scheme is "DEF" - different to the key in the Example1 system."
I believe that there is a mistake in this text, that it should read:
"...classification scheme is "BBB" -- different from ..."

Since "DEF" is the key for GLN in the Example 1 domain, while BBB is the GLN key in the National registry in Figure 1. (While we're at it I'd suggest the minor wording change -- altering 'different to' to be 'different from' )

2. There is a typo on page 8
"...or domain based key partiogion may..."
This should read:
"...or domain based key partition may..."

3. there is a typo on page 9:
uddi:example1.org:keyGenerator
this should use lower-case "keygenerator"

4. There is a typo on page 11
"...structure that does will produce..."
This should read
"...structure that will produce"


5. and one additional typo on page 14:

The save_tModel example which reads:
"...tModelKey="uddi:example1.orghr:payroll:keygenerator" is missing a colon. It should read:
"...tModelKey="uddi:example1.org:hr:payroll:keygenerator"


Regards
Jason


Jason Garbis
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-----Original Message-----
From: Luc Clement 
Sent: Friday, September 01, 2006 14:15
To: uddi-spec@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Posting "Understanding Key Partitions" Technical Note to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/

We've posted the TN to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/uddi-spec-tc-tn-understandingkeypartitions-20060822.htm and http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uddi-spec/doc/tn/uddi-spec-tc-tn-understandingkeypartitions-20060822.pdf for review by the TC.

I'd like to proceed to vote to approve this TN on our 12 Sep telecom. Please review and be ready to approve on the 12 Sep.

Thanks
Luc


Luc Clément | Director, Product Management | Systinet, a Mercury Division | One van de Graaff Drive Burlington, MA 01803 Phone +1 781.362.1330 | Mobile +1 978.793.2162 | Fax +1 781.362.1400 |


uddi-spec-tc-tn-understandingkeypartitions-20060822_CvR.doc



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