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Subject: Re: [virtio-comment] [PATCH 5/6] VIRTIO-63: Make sure examples are marked clearly.
On Mon, 3 Mar 2014 15:31:32 +1030 Rusty Russell <rusty@au1.ibm.com> wrote: > Signed-off-by: Rusty Russell <rusty@au1.ibm.com> > --- > content.tex | 17 ++++++++++------- > 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex > index f3899b6..a11525b 100644 > --- a/content.tex > +++ b/content.tex > @@ -212,8 +212,8 @@ result. > > The mechanism for bulk data transport on virtio devices is > pretentiously called a virtqueue. Each device can have zero or more > -virtqueues: for example, the simplest network device has one for > -transmit and one for receive. Each queue has a 16-bit queue size > +virtqueues\footnote{For example, the simplest network device has one for I'd make that "has one _virtqueue_ for transmit" - this is probably clearer as the footnote lacks the immediate context. > +transmit and one for receive}. Each queue has a 16-bit queue size > parameter, which sets the number of entries and implies the total size > of the queue. > > @@ -1621,7 +1624,7 @@ or report device failure. > \paragraph{Virtqueue Configuration}\label{sec:Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over PCI Bus / PCI-specific Initialization And Device Operation / Device Initialization / Virtqueue Configuration} > > As a device can have zero or more virtqueues for bulk data > -transport (for example, the simplest network device has two), the driver > +transport,\footnote{For example, the simplest network device has two} the driver Similarily, I'd write "two virtqueues" here. > needs to configure them as part of the device-specific > configuration. >
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