Re: [virtio] [PATCH 4/4] introduction: address lnovich comments

["Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>]

On Thu, Jan 30, 2014 at 11:09:51AM +0100, Paolo Bonzini wrote:
> Il 30/01/2014 10:13, Michael S. Tsirkin ha scritto:
> >Virtio
> >-  devices are implemented over PCI and other buses, and earlier drafts
> >-  been implemented on other buses not included in this specification.
> >-\footnote{The Linux implementation further separates the PCI virtio code
> >-from the specific virtio drivers: these drivers are shared with
> >-the non-PCI implementations (currently lguest and S/390).
> >-}
> >+  devices are implemented over MMIO, Channel I/O and PCI bus
> >+  transports
> >+\footnote{The Linux implementation further separates the virtio
> >+transport code from the specific virtio drivers: these drivers are shared
> >+between different transports.
> >+}, earlier drafts
> >+  have been implemented on other buses not included in this specification.
> >+
> 
> Perhaps you can move "in this specification" to the beginning of the
> sentence:
> 
> In this specification, Virtio devices are implemented over MMIO,
> Channel I/O and PCI bus transports\footnote{The Linux implementation
> further separates the virtio transport code from the specific virtio
> drivers: these drivers are shared between different transports.
> }. Earlier drafts have been implemented on other buses not included here.
> 
> 
> Paolo

Sure, I did this, thanks.