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Subject: Re: [virtio] [PATCH] intro: add advice on transition from legacy interfaces
On Thu, 2 Jul 2015 10:34:41 +0200 Paolo Bonzini <pbonzini@redhat.com> wrote: > >> +In this case, it might be benefitial for the reader to focus on > > > > s/benefitial/beneficial/ > > > >> +sections tagged "Legacy Interface" in the section title. > >> +These highlight the changes made since these earlier drafts. > > > > ", as these highlight the changes made since the earlier drafts." > > I prefer Michael's version for this sentence. English strongly prefers > simpler sentences, or so I was explained by native speakers. This is > unlike Italian, and my high school experience dealing with Kant suggests > that German is similar. :) Heh, I'd already have classified that as a simple sentence :) But no objections from my side. I'd still prefer s/these/the/, though.
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