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Subject: Re: [virtio] [PATCH] intro: add advice on transition from legacy interfaces



On 02/07/2015 10:52, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> > > > +sections tagged "Legacy Interface" in the section title.
> > > > +These highlight the changes made since these earlier drafts.
> > > 
> > > ", as these highlight the changes made since the earlier drafts."
> > 
> > I prefer Michael's version for this sentence.  English strongly prefers
> > simpler sentences, or so I was explained by native speakers.  This is
> > unlike Italian, and my high school experience dealing with Kant suggests
> > that German is similar. :)
>
> Heh, I'd already have classified that as a simple sentence :) But no
> objections from my side. I'd still prefer s/these/the/, though.

Agreed.

Paolo


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