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Subject: Re: [virtio] [PATCH] intro: add advice on transition from legacy interfaces
On 02/07/2015 10:52, Cornelia Huck wrote: > > > > +sections tagged "Legacy Interface" in the section title. > > > > +These highlight the changes made since these earlier drafts. > > > > > > ", as these highlight the changes made since the earlier drafts." > > > > I prefer Michael's version for this sentence. English strongly prefers > > simpler sentences, or so I was explained by native speakers. This is > > unlike Italian, and my high school experience dealing with Kant suggests > > that German is similar. :) > > Heh, I'd already have classified that as a simple sentence :) But no > objections from my side. I'd still prefer s/these/the/, though. Agreed. Paolo
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