[Bug 160] New: Multiple use of word activity

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           Summary: Multiple use of word “activity”
           Product: WS-CF
           Version: 1.0
          Platform: PC
               URL: http://www.choreology.com/external/ws-
                    cf.choreology_comments.htm#CHCF-2
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Text and diagrams
        AssignedTo: ws-caf@lists.oasis-open.org
        ReportedBy: tony.fletcher@choreology.com
         QAContact: mark.little@arjuna.com


Where: 2 1) (page 8, last para)

The paragraph repeatedly uses activity as an example or synonym for participant,
but also uses activity as the thing coordinated. Note especially “the outcome of
the activity to the list of registered activities”. Although nesting may be
possible, this architecture should use generally use the word at only one level.
(and the last sentence of the para, on p9, is obscure too)

Rework (or rethink)



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