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Subject: Keep those cards and letters coming

If the committee does not object, I will hit Jeremy’s comments below this evening – shortening the amount of time you have a CD….


This level of comments does not make substantive changes but are important. SG lunch date just made, so will not complete then.






"If something is not worth doing, it`s not worth doing well" - Peter Drucker

Toby Considine
TC9, Inc

TC Chair: oBIX & WS-Calendar

TC Editor: EMIX, EnergyInterop

U.S. National Inst. of Standards and Tech. Smart Grid Architecture Committee


Email: Toby.Considine@gmail.com
Phone: (919)619-2104

blog: www.NewDaedalus.com



From: Jeremy Roberts [mailto:jeremy@lonmark.org]
Sent: Wednesday, September 15, 2010 11:07 AM
To: toby.considine@gmail.com; Toby.Considine@unc.edu
Subject: Comments for WS-Calendar


Yes, I know… how late can these comments be?!


If you want to address them in the Public Review; that’s fine.  I tried to get them to you early but you know: SGIP meetings.


Here are my comments:


288 = "oBIX" is not consistent with remainder of document, using lower-case 'o'.


365 = "January 2010" needs to be separated from the URL for the URL to be valid.


366 = NAESB Smart Grid Requirements needs a reference.


383 = Footnote 1 references "lower Camel Case" without further explanation but perhaps that's OK; however, it references "CIM reference guides" without definition of the CIM".


410 = "and the requirements if the Smart Grid Interoperability Panel" ('if' should be 'of').


417 = "RESTful services" not otherwise defined; unless defined in SOA-RM as referenced by Footnote 2 (I did not check the SOA-RM).


450 = Consider alternate word "modifies" in place of "messes with" for government intervention.


451 = "0700" should be "07:00" for consistency.


462 = "known at Coordinated Universal Time" ('at' should be 'as', though purists would argue they are indeed different time systems -- and they are -- but some countries legislatively call-out GMT and thus, if we are not concerned with factions of a second, then let's consider them equal).  However, Section 3.1.1 stated that we are, potentially, concerned with fractions of a second and GMT and UTC can officially be up-to 9-tenths of a second different from each other.  Food for thought.


479 = "RESTfull" is not consistent with remainder of document, using double-'l' at the end.


491 = "elaborate" should be "elaborating".


522 = "CalDAv" should be "CalDAV".


545 = Table 3-2 is titled: "VTODO elements in Intervals" but more-accurately shows "VTODO 'properties' elements for an Interval".


582 = Table 3-3 shows Temporal Relationships in long and short forms: e.g., "FINISHSTART" and "FS".  However, in line 591, the value is "finishtostart".  A similar disconnect is found in lines 606 and 618.


586 = Table 3-4 is titled: "Elements of a Temporal Relationship" but more-accurately shows "Elements of a WS-Calendar Relation for a Temporal Relationship".


766 = The table (3-6) has a few auto-caps issues in the Definition column: "Uri" of timeStampRealm and "Xs:bool" of leapSecondsKnown are two I found.


800 = The table (4-1) has a few auto-caps issues: "Artifact" element and "WsCalendar:Performance" are two I found; thought the latter may be as intended.


847 = "startBeforeTolerance" (etc.) use a Camel Case but the elements themselves do not.  Just a note for consistency.


952 = Bill is a genius with the Calendar Gluon naming.  The more I read it; the more I like it.


1731 = Need at least one source for well-known Time Zone Aliases.


1738 = "ACLs" is an undefined acronym (almost defined by the Section title but not quite).


1741 = "a principals calendar resources" may have a plurality/possession issue.


1786 = "Error! Reference source not found."


1883 = "Error! Reference source not found."


2004 = "Error! Reference source not found."


2167 = "Error! Reference source not found."


2433 = "Error! Reference source not found."


2500 = "302 Redirect" should be "302 Found" because the meaning of 302 has changed (thanks to webmasters not following rules).  Ideally, 303 and 307 should be added to your list but the inclusive text allows for their use anyway.


2658 through 2662 = Asterisks should be removed from company names; they are a legacy Kavi issue.


2662 = "Jeremy Roberts" would prefer to be "Jeremy J. Roberts" but that's not a critical-path issue ;-)


2678 = "icalendar" should be "iCalendar".




- Jeremy



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