TC Admin comments on Schedule Signals and Streams Version 1.0

[Chet Ensign <chet.ensign@oasis-open.org>]

Members of the WS-Calendar TC,

TC Administration provides the following comments for the public review of the Schedule Signals and Streams Version 1.0 CSPRD01. These are things we noted while preparing the CSPRD for publication. 

- The Acknowledgements section has no acknowledgements listed. They'll need to be added for next iteration.

- 2 element examples styled as code wound up in the TOC. You will see them listed after section 1.5. To remove them from the TOC, re-apply the "Code" style to those two lines in Section 1.5 and then save. The lines should then be handled properly when TOC is regenerated.

- Section 3, Streams jumps from 1st to 3rd level headings. It isn't clear to us whether section 3 is really meant to be a level 2 heading (2.3, Streams) or whether the sections beneath it are supposed to be level 2s (e.g. 3.1, UML Diagram of Stream). 

- In the normative references, the [SOA-RM] url points to a directory, not a document (i.e. not to -> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/soa-rm.html). 

- The end of Section 1.1 has a reference error that should be corrected. ("…  as described in Error! Reference source not found..") 

- The text in normative reference [XML NAMES] is all bolded. 

- The reference to [xCal] appears to be to a much older generation of the specification, not the current version RFC 6321.

- The reference to WS-Calendar would be better using the "Citation format" which is provided with that document on the second page. The title is incorrect as listed.

- It appears that instructions from the document template at the beginning of Section 4 are still there. 

Let us know if you have any questions about any of these. 

Best, 

/chet 
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Chet Ensign
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