OASIS Mailing List ArchivesView the OASIS mailing list archive below
or browse/search using MarkMail.

 


Help: OASIS Mailing Lists Help | MarkMail Help

ws-dd message

[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]


Subject: RE: Issue 151 - DPWS - Editorial - Reformat terminology andreferences so they matches other WS-DD specs


Hello all-

Please see the attached document with change tracking.  It contains proposed edits for issues 150 and 151.

 

Thanks

--D

 

From: Ram Jeyaraman [mailto:Ram.Jeyaraman@microsoft.com]
Sent: Thursday, February 05, 2009 1:51 PM
To: ws-dd@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ws-dd] Issue 151 - DPWS - Editorial - Reformat terminology and references so they matches other WS-DD specs

 

This issue is assigned the number 151. For further discussions on this issue, please refer to this issue number or use this thread.

 

From: Dan Driscoll
Sent: Thursday, February 05, 2009 1:05 PM
To: Ram Jeyaraman
Subject: NEW Issue - DPWS - Editorial: reformat terminology and references so they matches other WS-DD specs

 

The terminology sections of DPWS are formatted differently from SOAP-over-UDP and WS-Discovery—specifically, the notational conventions collapse the RFC2119 definitions along with the more specific conventions, and both follow the terms and definitions.

 

Additionally, the references are formatted in a way that makes them difficult to read.  It is easier to read the SOAP-over-UDP references, which list the identifier on a separate line from the citation.

 

Proposed change: move and restructure the terminology section; reformat the references.

 

Updated text with change bars will follow.

wsdd-dpws-1.1-spec-wd-04-issues-150-151.docx



[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]