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Subject: RE: [ws-rx-editors] Fw: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and WS-RM Policy WD 9
Search and replace not good enough for you huh? Have to go and read the text huh? Curses! You are correct, those changes look good to me. -----Original Message----- From: Anish Karmarkar [mailto:Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com] Sent: Thursday, June 08, 2006 12:14 PM To: Marc Goodner Cc: Doug Davis; ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: Re: [ws-rx-editors] Fw: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and WS-RM Policy WD 9 Not all of these should be in caps. Looking at draft 14 (http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx-editors/download.php/18631/wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-14.odt) there are occurrences on lines (not counting the ones in the security consideration section): 82, 128, 129, 136, 313: s/may/can/ 391: s/may/are/ 223, 826: s/should/SHOULD/ 174, 522: s/required/REQUIRED/ 828, 839: s/shall/SHALL/ Marc Goodner wrote: > I think they should all be in caps. Are there ones in places other than the ones Doug caught already? > > -----Original Message----- > From: Anish Karmarkar [mailto:Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com] > Sent: Thursday, June 08, 2006 11:18 AM > To: Marc Goodner > Cc: Doug Davis; ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: Re: [ws-rx-editors] Fw: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and > WS-RM Policy WD 9 > > The keywords are not just in section 5. That was just an example. There are in few other places too. > > -Anish > -- > > Marc Goodner wrote: > >>As you point out, it isn't really a problem per se as it is. So I'd say don't worry about the Sec. 5 2119 terms for now. Correct whatever stays or is added from 121 instead. >> >>Marc Goodner >>(425) 703-1903 >>(Sent from Windows Mobile 5.0) >> >>-----Original Message----- >>From: "Anish Karmarkar" <Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com> >>To: "Doug Davis" <dug@us.ibm.com> >>Cc: "ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org" >><ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org> >>Sent: 6/7/06 5:36 PM >>Subject: Re: [ws-rx-editors] Fw: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and >>WS-RM Policy WD 9 >> >>Looks ok to me. >> >> >>I did a search for the 2119 lowercase keywords ('may', 'should' ...) >>and found that there are instances where they are not capitalized (for >>example, in the sec consideration section). If these were intended to >>be >>2119 keywords then to be consistent with our typographical convention >>we should capitalize them. If not, we should find suitable alternatives. >>2119 does *not* require the keywords to be capitalized, so leaving >>them as is imply that they are to be interpreted in the same way as >>their capitalized brethren. >> >>-Anish >>-- >> >>Doug Davis wrote: >> >> >>>ok - Marc (editors), see if this version looks ok to you. >>>-Doug
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