Some minor editorial nits in draft 15 wsrm spec section 4/page 25

["Yalcinalp, Umit" <umit.yalcinalp@sap.com>]

Title: Some minor editorial nits in draft 15 wsrm spec section 4/page 25

Folks,

I noticed the following in my reading. If this is covered already, please accept the apologies.

Section 4 Paragraph 1 on Page 25 may read better with a different font or using bold with fault names. Further, there is a mix of the fault name vs. the fault code in the text. Fault names are indicated with using spaces with approprite section names, i.e. WSRM Required indicated by wsrm:WSRMRequired subcode.

The paragraph intermix this usage, i.e.

"CreateSequenceRefused is a possible fault reply for this operation". It should rather read "Create Fault Refused fault is a possible fault as a reply for this operation". I figured using the elements would be harder.

Similarly WSRMRequired is a fault generated … should read "WSRM Required"

Alternatively we may consider to change the heading names.

Regardless, using a different font for fault names may improve readability.

--umit

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Dr. Umit Yalcinalp
Architect
NetWeaver Industry Standards
SAP Labs, LLC
Email: umit.yalcinalp@sap.com Tel: (650) 320-3095
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