RE: [ws-rx-editors] CD4 ready for editor review

["Gilbert Pilz" <Gilbert.Pilz@bea.com>]

(I tried to bring this issue up right around the time the mail servers
croaked. The message appears to have gone into limbo.) 

We have a problem with the glossary.

1.) There are terms such as "Sequence Lifecycle Message" and "Sequence
Traffic Message" that appear in Sections 5 and 6 which do not appear in
the glossary.

2.) The old, undefined, hazy phrase "WS-RM protocol message" appears in
a number of places throughout the other sections.

Attached is a diff from cd-04 that includes the new glossary terms and
cleans up some of the incosistent usage of terms like "WS-RM protocol
message" and "SequenceAcknowledgement message" etc.

In my opinion these changes are purely editorial as there is no change
of semantics; simply a little more precision around the semantics that
are already there. I would like to get these into the CD candidate
before we publish it to the main TC.

- gp

> -----Original Message-----
> From: dug@us.ibm.com [mailto:dug@us.ibm.com] 
> Sent: Friday, August 04, 2006 3:10 PM
> To: ws-rx-editors@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [ws-rx-editors] CD4 ready for editor review
> 
> ok - I've placed CD4 into a CD4 folder and I think I've 
> updated everything appropriately.  If you get a chance please 
> look it over and so we can post it for the whole TC to review.
> thanks
> -Doug
>

wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-04-glos.odt

wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-04-glos.pdf