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Subject: Non-trivial editorial issues
All, Below are the non-trivial (non-typos, non-formating etc) ed issues that I mentioned in my previous email. There is an agreement amongst the editors on these. I'm not sure if I need to raise a separate issue for this (so that it can be tracked in our issues list). If so, consider this to be a new issue. The page/line numbers refer to the PDF doc that Doug uploaded today [1]. ----- Page : 6 Line : 118 Add the following: Namespace names of the general form "http://example.org/..." and "http://example.com/..." represent application or context-dependent URIs (see RFC 2396 [RFC 2396]). Page : 13 Line : 243 This paragraph is applicable to section 3 as well as section 4. Move this to section 1. Page : 14 Line : 298 Not quite accurate. Use the XPATH notation used above to make this unambiguous. I.e. /wsrm:Sequence/wsrm:LastMessage Page : 21 Line : 545 Not quite accurate. A wsrm:Offer element can be in the extensibility point. A better way to say this is to use the xpath like syntax that is already being used. Replace - "This element MUST be present if the corresponding <wsrm:CreateSequence> message contained an <wsrm:Offer> element." with: "This element MUST be present if the corresponding <wsrm:CreateSequence> message contained an /wsrm:CreateSequence/wsrm:Offer element." Page : 33 Line : 894 Include a soap 1.2 reference (and a pointer at the appropriate place in the main spec as well) Page : 33 Line : 896 Never used. Include this ref where ever 2396 is used Page : 33 Line : 901 Never used. Include this reference where we talk about schema Page : 33 Line : 903 Never used. Include this reference where we talk about schema types Page : 33 Line : 912 Never used. Remove this. Page : 34 None of the references on this page are used. Delete them. Page : 35 Line : 956 All other types are non-anon types. For consistency make this a non-anon type too. Page : 37 Line : 1015 for consistency change this to 'FaultCodeType' ----- -Anish -- [1] http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.php/14548/wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-03.pdf
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