RE: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01 (wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf) uploaded

["Paul Cotton" <Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com>]

More editorial comments on WS-ReliableMessaging:

1. Line 129:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrm/200510/wsrm.xsd does not resolve to the
XML Schema file.

2. Line 127:
The text " Table Number range Table" above the table does not make
sense.

3. Line 123:
Are we expecting to provide a "namespace document" at the namespace URI:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrm/200510
since it is different than the XML Schema file's URI?
(Note this question also applies to the RMPolicy namespace)

4. Line 133:
The "[WS-Addressing]" reference is not in blue in the PDF.

5. Line 864 Security Considerations:
None of the references in this section use the same style as in other
places in the document where the actual reference label appears in "[]".

6. Line 1167 B.1.Create Sequence:
Is there any reason why this subsection cannot start on the previous
page to avoid the nearly completely blank page?

7. Line 1390:
http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrm/200510/wsdl/wsrm.wsdl does not resolve
to the WSDL file.

/paulc

Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3
Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com

 



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Cotton [mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com]
> Sent: November 2, 2005 9:23 PM
> To: gilbert.pilz@bea.com
> Cc: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01 (wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-
> 01.pdf) uploaded
> 
> From a quick review of this document:
> 
> 1. Line 2:
> Delete the space between "Reliable" and "Messaging".
> 
> 2. Line 7:
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-rx/wsrm/200510/wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf
> This document URI appears right given the decision at the last meeting
> but the namespace URI on line 147
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrm/200510/
> might be wrong since it does not includes "ws-rx".
> 
> 3. Footers on every page seem completely wrong.
> 
> 4. Line 42 Table of Contents
> There is no space between any of the section numbers and the text of
> each section title.
> 
> 5. line 141: "SectionNamespace"
> The section number appears to be missing from this cross-reference and
> the spacing appears to be wrong.
> 
> /paulc
> 
> Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
> 17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3
> Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
> mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: gilbert.pilz@bea.com [mailto:gilbert.pilz@bea.com]
> > Sent: November 2, 2005 8:45 PM
> > To: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> > Subject: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01
> (wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf)
> > uploaded
> >
> > The document named wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01 (wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf) has
> been
> > submitted by Gilbert Pilz to the OASIS Web Services Reliable
Exchange
> > (WS-RX) TC document repository.
> >
> > Document Description:
> > Committee Draft 01
> >
> > View Document Details:
> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-
> > rx/document.php?document_id=15177
> >
> > Download Document:
> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-
> > rx/download.php/15177/wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf
> >
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