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Subject: Re: [ws-rx] Additional comments on working draft 08
- From: Doug Davis <dug@us.ibm.com>
- To: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
- Date: Wed, 11 Jan 2006 11:03:00 -0500
Dan - thanks - I've added these edits
to WD9.
(Marc - looking at yours next)
-Doug
Daniel Millwood <MILLWOOD@uk.ibm.com>
01/11/2006 05:47 AM
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Here are some suggested editorial changes relating to the diff version
of
the document wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-08-diff.pdf
Line 395 spelling. Change sate to state
Line 398 Add word 'the' into "This message indicates that the
RM
Destination"
Lines 529 & 530 seem like a repeat of lines 527 & 528
Line 588/589 states "It contains a range of message Sequence
MessageNumbers". Perhaps drop the word message?
Line 590/591. Change "This element must not be present if a
sibling
<wsrm:Nack> or <wsrm:None> elements are also present ..."
to "This
element must not be present if a sibling <wsrm:Nack> or <wsrm:None>
element
is also present ..."
Line 614 as for 590/591 change "elements are" to "element
is"
Line 623 as for 614 change "elements are" to "element is"
Thanks, Dan
WS-Reliable Messaging Architect and Team Lead
IBM WebSphere Messaging Design and Development
MP 211
Hursley
Tel. Internal 248617
Tel. External +44 1962 818617
Email. millwood@uk.ibm.com
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