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Subject: Re: [ws-rx] Additional comments on working draft 08



Dan - thanks - I've added these edits to WD9.
(Marc - looking at yours next)
-Doug



Daniel Millwood <MILLWOOD@uk.ibm.com>

01/11/2006 05:47 AM

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[ws-rx] Additional comments on working draft 08









Here are some suggested editorial changes relating to the diff version of
the document wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-08-diff.pdf
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         

Line 395 spelling.  Change sate to state
Line 398 Add word 'the'  into "This message indicates that the RM
Destination"
Lines 529 & 530 seem like a repeat of lines 527 & 528
Line 588/589 states "It contains a range of message Sequence
MessageNumbers".  Perhaps drop the word message?
Line 590/591.  Change "This element must not be present if a sibling
<wsrm:Nack> or <wsrm:None> elements are also present ..."   to "This
element must not be present if a sibling <wsrm:Nack> or <wsrm:None> element
is also present ..."
Line 614 as for 590/591 change "elements are" to "element is"
Line 623 as for 614 change "elements are" to "element is"


Thanks,  Dan

WS-Reliable Messaging Architect and Team Lead
IBM WebSphere Messaging Design and Development
MP 211
Hursley
Tel. Internal 248617
Tel. External +44 1962 818617
Email. millwood@uk.ibm.com




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