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Subject: Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and WS-RM Policy WD 9
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WS-RM WD 13 http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.php/18451/wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-13.pdf Line numbers in this document are inaccurate, particularly in
Section 2. I only use line numbers below with sections or pages where there are
not two of the same. I did not review the state tables given there is another revision
planned. Similarly I did not examine the schema, message examples or wsdl in
any detail but plan to. Why are these section in that order? Doesn’t it
make more sense to have the wsdl follow the schema? Section 2 Change “and Transmits it” to “and transmits
it”. Change “that Sends” to “that sends” Figure 2 is not legible. Section 3.1 Line 222, page 11 “none” does not need to be in
quotes. Line 309, page 13 the 2119 term optional is used and not in caps. Section 3.2 Line 347, page 14 the 2119 term may is used and is not in caps. Section 3.3 Line 459, page 16 check for a space between”[URI])”
and “of”. Section 3.5 Line 530, page 18 change “below” to “Section
3.6”. Section 3.6 Line 558, page 19 reference to “Section Request
Acknowledgment” is not consistent with references elsewhere in spec.
Change “Section Request Acknowledgement” to “Section
3.5”. Line 562, page 19 “piggy-backing does not need to be in
quotes. Line 615, page 20 strike “Note:” as 2119 text is used
in the text that follows it is more than a note. Section 4 The first two paragraphs of this section are practically
duplicates of each other. The first paragraph can be stricken by adding a one
sentence description of WSRMRequired after the second sentence of the second
paragraph. I can raise this as a new issue if that is preferable. Line 670, page 22 end sentence beginning on line 668 after
“detected”. Line 676, page 22 change “defined in the version of WS-Addressing used in the message” to “defined in WS-Addressing” as
we only reference a single version of Addressing. Line
676, page 22 change “current version” to “W3C
Recommendation” Line
678, page 22 update to W3C Rec value, “http://www.w3.org/2005/08/addressing/fault” Line 680, page 22 change “section 4 of WS-Addressing”
to “section 6 of WS-Addressing SOAP Binding”. Line 694, page 22 update to
W3C Rec value, “http://www.w3.org/2005/08/addressing/fault” Section 6 Update [WS-Addressing] to point to Recommendation. W3C Recommendation, “Web Services Addressing 1.0 - Core”, May 2006. http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-core-20060509/
W3C Recommendation, “Web Services Addressing 1.0 – SOAP Binding”, May 2006. http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-soap-20060509/ Update [WS-Policy] to point to W3C Member Submission. W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Framework (WS-Policy)," April 2006. http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-Policy-20060425/
Update [WS-PolicyAttachment] to point to W3C Member Submission. W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Attachment (WS-PolicyAttachment)," April 2006. http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-PolicyAttachment-20060425/
Section C Line 1469 change “non-normative”
to “normative”. Section E Line 1593 the TBD should be
completed for PR. WS-RM Policy WD9 http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.php/18454/wsrmp-1.1-spec-wd-09.pdf
Section 4 Update [WS-Policy] to point to W3C Member Submission. W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Framework (WS-Policy)," April 2006. http://www.w3.org/Submission/WS-Policy/
http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-Policy-20060425/
Update [WS-PolicyAttachment] to point to W3C Member Submission. W3C Member Submission,"Web Services Policy Attachment (WS-PolicyAttachment)," April 2006. http://www.w3.org/Submission/WS-PolicyAttachment/
http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-PolicyAttachment-20060425/
Add reference to WSS 1.1
under [WSS] (as is done in WS-RM). Anthony Nadalin, Chris Kaler, Phillip Hallam-Baker, Ronald
Monzillo, eds. "OASIS
Web Services Security: SOAP Message Security 1.1 (WS-Security 2004)", OASIS Standard 200602, February
2006. Section A Line 253 the TBD should be
completed for PR. |
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