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Subject: Issue 133: Duplicate text in fault section
Here
is my proposed text. The first paragraph gets struck, the new sentence is in
bold. I’ll send by EOD unless I
get a fault. Replace: The faults defined in this section fall into one of two
categories; those faults that are the result of messages or operations within a specific Sequence and
those faults that are not. By their nature the CreateSequenceRefused, UnknownSequence, and WSRMRequired
faults cannot be correlated with a Sequence. All other faults defined in this section relate
to the processing of WS-RM protocol messages or messages containing WS-RM header blocks targeted at a
specific Sequence and are collectively referred to as "Sequence faults". Faults for the CreateSequence message exchange are treated
as defined in WS-Addressing. CreateSequenceRefused is a possible fault reply for this
operation. UnknownSequence is a fault generated by endpoints when messages carrying RM header
blocks targeted at unrecognized or terminated Sequences are detected. All other faults in
this section relate to the processing of RM header blocks targeted at known Sequences and are collectively
referred to as Sequence faults. Entities that generate Sequence faults SHOULD send those faults to the
same [destination] as <wsrm:SequenceAcknowledgement> messages. These faults are
correlated using the Sequence identifier carried in the detail. With: Faults for the CreateSequence message exchange are treated
as defined in WS-Addressing. CreateSequenceRefused is a possible fault reply for this
operation. UnknownSequence is a fault generated by endpoints when messages carrying RM header
blocks targeted at unrecognized or terminated Sequences are detected. WSRMRequired is a
fault generated by endpoints that require the use of WS-RM and receive a message that did not use the
protocol. All
other faults in this section relate to the processing of RM header blocks targeted at
known Sequences and are collectively referred to as Sequence faults. Entities that generate
Sequence faults SHOULD send those faults to the same [destination] as <wsrm:SequenceAcknowledgement>
messages. These
faults are correlated using the Sequence identifier carried in the
detail. Marc Goodner Technical Diplomat Microsoft Corporation Tel: (425) 703-1903 From: Marc Goodner
[mailto:mgoodner@microsoft.com] Title: Duplicate text in fault section Description: In Section 4
of WS-RM the first two paragraphs
of this section are practically duplicates of each other. Target: core Type: editorial Proposal: The first paragraph can
be stricken by adding a one sentence description of WSRMRequired after the
second sentence of the second paragraph in Section 4. |
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