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Subject: New Issue: Reword the Abstract
Title: Reword the Abstract Description: The final sentence within the Abstract (lines 27-29 in the doc I have) reads rather oddly: "WS-ReliableMessaging is a building block that is used in conjunction with other specifications and application-specific protocols to accommodate a wide variety of *protocols* related to the operation of distributed Web services." I don't think that the repetition of 'protocol' helps here. I find the sentence confusing. Justification: Our spec should be as easy to read as possible Target: core Type: editorial Proposal: Thanks to Anish for the following suggestion! Replace 'protocols' with 'requirements and scenarios' "WS-ReliableMessaging is a building block that is used in conjunction with other specifications and application-specific protocols to accommodate a wide variety of *requirements and scenarios* related to the operation of distributed Web services." Related issues: None Thanks, Matt
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