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Subject: NEW ISSUE: editorial clarify second bullet in Protocol Invariants

From: Christopher B Ferris <chrisfer@us.ibm.com>
To: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
Date: Tue, 8 Aug 2006 12:23:11 -0400

Title: editorial clarify second bullet in Protocol Invariants

Description:

the second bullet, on line 219 of CD4 draft, could be clearer, and use the defined
terms appropriately.

target: spec

type: editorial

Proposal:

Change:

line 219: Within every acknowledgement it issues, the RM Destination MUST include one or more
acknowledgement ranges that contain the message number of every message accepted by the RM
Destination. The RM Destination MUST exclude the message numbers of any messages it has not
accepted.

to:

line 219: Within every Acknowledgement Message it issues, the RM Destination MUST include one or more
<AcknowledgementRange> child elements that contain, in their collective ranges, the message numbers of every message
accepted by the RM Destination. The RM Destination MUST exclude, in the <AcknowledgementRange> elements,
the message numbers of any messages it has not accepted.

Cheers,

Christopher Ferris
STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy
email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
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